An Excerpt From Coming Undone

Erin is a very involved part of her siblings’ lives – how about a scene from COMING UNDONE when Elise first meets Ben and Todd?

Copyright 2010, Lauren Dane
All Rights Reserved, The Berkley Publishing Group

“They’re good kids. Brody’s yard is secure. Nina and Mase belong to Arvin, he’s the manager of Brody’s shop. He and his wife just live two blocks over. The others, heck, Rennie probably knows a few more, as many of us live within a mile or so. Wow, you’re a ballerina. That’s awesome.” Erin finally wound down, and Elise couldn’t help but be charmed.

“Not as awesome as being a rock star.”

An extremely handsome man came up to them, handed Erin a bottle of cream soda, kissed her gently and grinned at Elise. “Hi there, I’m Todd, Erin’s husband. Can I get you something to drink?”

“Nice to meet you. I’m Elise. Um, sure. One of those would be good, thanks.” She indicated the cream soda and he moved away to grab her one. “He’s pretty.”

Erin laughed. “He is. I have two of them, so I hope you’re not offended.”

“Two of what?”

“Todd is my husband, but Ben . . .” She paused, looking around until she smiled again and pointed out another man, this one bigger than Todd but just as ridiculously good-looking. “Ben is ours too. Our husband but without the paperwork.”

Was this a test? “Lucky you.” Elise shrugged. “That one is pretty too.”

Erin seemed to relax a bit. “I am lucky. They’re both . . . Well, to find one person to love is special enough, but to find two and to be loved just as much in return, it’s pretty amazing.”

3 comments to “An Excerpt From Coming Undone”

  1. Renee
    September 19th, 2012 at 5:55 am · Link

    Love love love this series 🙂

  2. Christine
    September 19th, 2012 at 6:39 am · Link

    One of all time favorire series that I re read often. Can’t wait to read more of Erin, Ben & Todd.

  3. Viki S.
    September 19th, 2012 at 1:12 pm · Link

    I loved this!


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