More INSIDE OUT GRAND PRIZE DAY Excerpt Goodness!!

Some more of Cope with his friends at the beginning of COMING UNDONE when Brody first takes real notice of Elise…

Copyright 2010, Lauren Dane
All Rights Reserved, The Berkley Publishing Group

Ben looked up from his bike and toward the noise across the way and then back over to Brody. “Dude, when did you get a new neighbor? I thought an elderly couple lived over there.”

Brody caught the sight of two females, one grown chasing a smaller one, laughing, water spraying from the hose. He smiled briefly at the idyllic scene and the flash of pale blonde hair as they rounded a corner. “Dunno. I noticed a new car in the driveway, but whoever they are I haven’t met them yet. Maybe a young family or something.”

“Maybe a hot single mom,” Cope, Ben’s younger brother, added. “That would be nice.”

“I’m not looking for hot single moms. I don’t need any baggage or ex-husbands hanging around.” Christ, why would he? There were plenty of single women without kids and exes around. Any- way, she probably had a husband, not that he’d noticed one way or the other.

Cope snorted and got on his bike. “Not for you, dumbass. For me. You can get your own pussy, I’m not your pimp.”

“Don’t fuck anyone in my neighborhood, Cope. The last thing I need is to be involved in a situation where some woman is brooding over you when you dump her. Don’t fuck where I sleep.”

“You wish I’d fuck where you sleep.” Cope raised a brow, smirking before he slid his shades up over his eyes.

“Ha! If I liked men, yours wouldn’t be the ass I coveted. You’re too short. I couldn’t fuck you without bending my knees and straining my back. Plus, you’re not as hot as your brother, who I’d totally fuck if my sister wouldn’t kill me.”

Ben laughed, tossing a towel at his little brother. Considering that Ben was fucking not only Erin but her husband Todd, who was also Ben’s boyfriend, Brody wasn’t too far off the mark. Both on Ben’s attractiveness and his sister’s willingness to kill anyone who tried to filch one of her men.

“I’d be fucking you, old man.”

Brody barked a laugh. “Now it’s you wishing. Stop harassing my neighbors and their children and let’s get this show on the road.” Brody snorted, shaking his head as he climbed aboard his bike and keyed it on. He slid the strap of his helmet home, tightening it, and adjusted his ass on the seat. A new splurge, comfortable for long rides just like the one he was about to take.

Six of them roared down the street, toward the freeway and a day of riding out in the gorgeous weather. Freedom.

8 comments to “More INSIDE OUT GRAND PRIZE DAY Excerpt Goodness!!”

  1. Carrie
    November 1st, 2010 at 10:31 am · Link

    These excerpts are making me want INSIDE OUT right now!!

  2. martha
    November 1st, 2010 at 10:44 am · Link

    I have a question – I have not read the first two books in this series, can I start with Inside Out?

  3. laurendane
    November 1st, 2010 at 10:47 am · Link

    Martha – you can. Each book is standalone. But the series as a whole is really about family and connections so starting with book three, just be aware you’re not going to get the dynamics already established in the first two books. Also, each of these other characters has a part to play in the other books.

  4. Renee
    November 1st, 2010 at 10:51 am · Link

    I so love this series 😀 and I can’t wait for Cope to be released on the rest of the world. I will be rereading the whole series again.

  5. Rachel Riddles
    November 1st, 2010 at 11:38 am · Link

    Great excerpt!!! I think i’ve commented on every possible post you have!! Can you tell I’m EXCITED!!!!!!!!!! 😆

  6. becky jean
    November 1st, 2010 at 2:06 pm · Link

    I am ciked!

  7. Jessica
    November 1st, 2010 at 2:56 pm · Link

    Brody’s voice sends shivers down my spine….always has… 😉

  8. Collette
    November 1st, 2010 at 3:56 pm · Link

    I love this one–the back and forth between these guys kills me.