Poetry Monday (or rather, freeform creative writing monday)
May
21
2007
6 Comments ★ Posted in Poetry Monday

This is today’s entry – yes, in general, they’re all very erotic so the usual warnings apply. 18 and older only please. Naughty stuff behind the cut…

Also aboard the train:
Rhian
RG
Christine
Stak
Susan Helene Gottfried
Anya


Throb

The steady throb
throb
throb of my hands
beats in time with my heart
with the slick bead of my clit
the hardened points of my nipples

I am blindfolded
but my flesh can hear
your breath
can feel you move around me and when you touch me
with the tails of the flogger
it sings

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6 comments to “Poetry Monday (or rather, freeform creative writing monday)”

  1. rhian
    May 21st, 2007 at 10:33 am · Link

    there’s something about that word throb, ya know.
    LOVE: “but my flesh can hear
    your breath” and “with the tails of the flogger it sings”

    i need to start reading yours after work when hubby is around. …POUNCE….



  2. R.G. Alexander
    May 21st, 2007 at 12:57 pm · Link

    Always sizzling! I agree-I need to wait till Cookie gets home to read these babies! Awesome.



  3. Christine
    May 21st, 2007 at 1:48 pm · Link

    “I am blindfolded
    but my flesh can hear
    your breath”

    Great poem. I’m going to follow suit and read to my husband in bed this evening! Thanks!

    Mine’s up too.



  4. stak
    May 21st, 2007 at 2:48 pm · Link

    okay, i’m officially ridiculously turned on now……thanks for making me walk with a limp…………



  5. Susan Helene Gottfried
    May 21st, 2007 at 6:13 pm · Link

    I think we all cued in to that flesh hearing your breath line. Wow, is that a strong one.

    As always, wonderful!

    I posted fiction today. Not terribly exciting, but survey says it’s a funny one.



  6. anya bast
    May 22nd, 2007 at 6:29 am · Link

    Oh, yummy. I love this one.