Finished the edit of Room Mates! I had to be ruthless with this edit, there was stuff that was superflous but I liked it, I liked the interaction of the characters a lot in three interconnected scenes and at first I used a tiny chip, getting rid here and there but I finally admitted to myself that it was all unnecessary and cut it. The story is much tighter now.

I’m off to write a summary, which I often find difficult because I always feel like it’s difficult to convey the nuances of the story in just one page but the more I do it, the better I become at it.

Once this one is out the door I’m back to Raptor Flight which I’d like to have finished by the end of the month.

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