Poetry Monday

Just one line, a snippet really, still 18 and over please.

Looking down between us, the sight of your cock disappearing into me and retreating mesmerizes me…

8 comments to “Poetry Monday”

  1. Susan Helene Gottfried
    July 16th, 2007 at 2:47 pm · Link

    Yeup, that’s one line, all right. And a whole LOT of heat and imagery.

    Nicely done!!!!

  2. rhian
    July 16th, 2007 at 3:23 pm · Link

    talk about minimalist heaven! 😀
    Susan is right – a whole lotta heat and imagery. Not surprisingly i keep going back to read it again and again.

  3. Red
    July 16th, 2007 at 4:26 pm · Link

    Oh yum I love that visual. And Lauren, I see you are doing fantastic in the writing challenge. I need to get my butt down to work, I feel the P-R-E-S-S-U-R-E! 😀

  4. Emily Veinglory
    July 16th, 2007 at 5:19 pm · Link


    I’m a little mesmerised too

  5. Charlene
    July 16th, 2007 at 5:33 pm · Link

    You inspired me to wax poetic, too. :mrgreen:

  6. Ann
    July 16th, 2007 at 6:03 pm · Link

    Definitely, nicely done. 😀 Must go sweat now.

  7. Seeley deBorn
    July 16th, 2007 at 7:47 pm · Link

    A single line…


  8. Christine
    July 17th, 2007 at 8:14 am · Link

    What a snippet it was 😉