Just one line, a snippet really, still 18 and over please.
Looking down between us, the sight of your cock disappearing into me and retreating mesmerizes me…
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Yeup, that’s one line, all right. And a whole LOT of heat and imagery.
talk about minimalist heaven! 😀
Susan is right – a whole lotta heat and imagery. Not surprisingly i keep going back to read it again and again.
Oh yum I love that visual. And Lauren, I see you are doing fantastic in the writing challenge. I need to get my butt down to work, I feel the P-R-E-S-S-U-R-E! 😀
I’m a little mesmerised too
You inspired me to wax poetic, too.
Definitely, nicely done. 😀 Must go sweat now.
A single line…
What a snippet it was 😉
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