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Poetry Monday
Jul
16
2007

Just one line, a snippet really, still 18 and over please.

Looking down between us, the sight of your cock disappearing into me and retreating mesmerizes me…

8 comments to “Poetry Monday”

  1. Susan Helene Gottfried
    July 16th, 2007 at 2:47 pm · Link

    Yeup, that’s one line, all right. And a whole LOT of heat and imagery.

    Nicely done!!!!



  2. rhian
    July 16th, 2007 at 3:23 pm · Link

    talk about minimalist heaven! πŸ˜€
    Susan is right – a whole lotta heat and imagery. Not surprisingly i keep going back to read it again and again.



  3. Red
    July 16th, 2007 at 4:26 pm · Link

    Oh yum I love that visual. And Lauren, I see you are doing fantastic in the writing challenge. I need to get my butt down to work, I feel the P-R-E-S-S-U-R-E! πŸ˜€



  4. Emily Veinglory
    July 16th, 2007 at 5:19 pm · Link

    😯

    I’m a little mesmerised too



  5. Charlene
    July 16th, 2007 at 5:33 pm · Link

    You inspired me to wax poetic, too. :mrgreen:



  6. Ann
    July 16th, 2007 at 6:03 pm · Link

    Definitely, nicely done. πŸ˜€ Must go sweat now.



  7. Seeley deBorn
    July 16th, 2007 at 7:47 pm · Link

    A single line…

    wow



  8. Christine
    July 17th, 2007 at 8:14 am · Link

    What a snippet it was πŸ˜‰





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