Poetry (or Creative Writing) Monday…

I’ve missed this one a few weeks in a row. So something for adults only behind the cut!


Devouring. Lips against lips, tongues slide against each other in a wet, seductive dance. Back against the wall behind her. His weight presses her there. Holds her in the place he wants her.

His cock grinds into her as his hands pull the front of her blouse open.

Lips find her nipples as she arches into that fevered mouth. Her hands hold him to her.

He grabs her upper arms, moving her to the bed and she watches greedily as his hands work to pull his jeans off. The soft rasp of his belt leaving the loops brings a gasp from her lips.

Straddling her body, his cock finds the valley between her breasts as she holds them tight together. His hands find purchase on the headboard as he fucks through that soft, creamy nook she’s creating.

Leaning down, he watches as her tongue slides along the weeping slit of his cock as he thrusts.

When he comes, the hot silk of him slides through her breasts, down her neck. The scent of him, raw and strong, fills her senses as she moves to touch it. Spread his come around her flesh.

A deep sound of longing breaks from him as he watches her hands. Watches her come slick nipples as she pulls them between her fingers. Watches one hand trail down to pull up her skirt and slide the panties aside.

“No. I want to see it.” He pulls the panties off and she widens her thighs.

Fingers working her cunt, the other hand still on her nipples, her back arches, exposing the long line of her body to him.

He loves the wet sound she makes as her fingers fuck into her cunt, loves the way her lip is caught between her teeth. Loves the way she can’t take her time but rather hurries to orgasm every time.

Desire coils low in his gut as she flies apart in front of him, as he moves back up her body and finds her lips. Again. He has to have her again

7 comments to “Poetry (or Creative Writing) Monday…”

  1. R.G. Alexander
    June 18th, 2007 at 10:49 am · Link

    Every single time-Whew!
    Teach me! *bowing humbly before the master* LOL
    Thats awesome!

  2. Lisa Andel
    June 18th, 2007 at 11:17 am · Link

    Dang, I’m always up for some excellent hawt sex!

    Thank you.

  3. Susan Helene Gottfried
    June 18th, 2007 at 12:04 pm · Link

    All right, where’s the Tour Manager and who’ll watch the kids when he gets home???

    Lauren, this is great. I’m glad you’re back on the train today. I’ve missed this hot stuff!

  4. Red Garnier
    June 18th, 2007 at 12:12 pm · Link

    Lauren Dane you rock!

    *bowing head and chanting reverently along with RG!*


  5. Sparky Duck
    June 18th, 2007 at 12:37 pm · Link

    yes indeed my kinda poetry :mrgreen:

  6. rhian
    June 18th, 2007 at 4:30 pm · Link

    i’ve having a hard time commenting because i keep scrolling back up to read again and lose my train of thought…. ummmm – is it suddenly hot in here? Damn that was good. I think i need a cigarette… 🙂

  7. Ava Rose Johnson
    June 19th, 2007 at 10:35 am · Link

    Hot Hot Hot. Thanks for brightening up my Tuesday!