Poetry Monday

This is more short erotica than poetry and it is MOST DEFINITELY meant for adults only. I’m putting it behind a cut so be forwarned….

Submission Like a Cloak

It’s dark and I’m waiting. I feel you behind me. I stand, unmoving until you push me toward the counter. I brace my hands there.

The jingle of your beltbuckle sends shivers down my spine and my head drops forward as the lethargic narcotic effect of what you do to me begins to settle inside, fill my cells one by one, building until I’m teetering on the edge.

The leather bites into the flesh of my thighs and ass as your fingers find me wet, needing you. I grip the counter as you scratch down the line of my back. Twice. My breathing is slow and heavy, submission like a cloak.

When you thrust deep into my cunt I’m beyond words and so I hold on and you pull just nearly out and I move back, not wanting to lose contact and I’m stretched then as you continue.

Slow then fast, deep and hard, your cock slides into me steadily. I feel my hair on my face, sliding like cool silk against the heat of my forehead, sticking to my lips.

It feels so fucking good I can’t slip away entirely as the blunt head of your cock strokes over that sweet spot inside me. Until spiraling, it bursts.

8 comments to “Poetry Monday”

  1. lillian feisty
    May 14th, 2007 at 10:29 am · Link

    That is effing awesome ❗

  2. R.G. Alexander
    May 14th, 2007 at 10:30 am · Link

    Wow. Okay…Wow. Am I blushing? Awesome and amazing!

  3. Crystal Jordan
    May 14th, 2007 at 10:32 am · Link

    Does anyone have some ice? Anyone?

  4. rhian
    May 14th, 2007 at 10:42 am · Link

    whew – that is some hot. thanks for heating up the room today – it was a wee bit chilly. grin!

  5. Robin L. Rotham
    May 14th, 2007 at 12:25 pm · Link

    Visceral and honest and HOT! Love it!

  6. Rashenbo
    May 14th, 2007 at 5:33 pm · Link


    Yup, that’s a little toasty 😈

    Erotic and emotional, one can certainly get a feel for the passion. Thank you for sharing!

  7. Susan Helene Gottfried
    May 14th, 2007 at 6:17 pm · Link

    Oh, goodness. This was a good one to end the day with!

    If I can’t walk come morning, you all know why…

  8. Christine
    May 14th, 2007 at 6:27 pm · Link

    Very, very yummy to read. More please. Love the anticipation . . .