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Drowning In You (a wee poem)
I’m drowning in you
slipping the binds that hold me
hands on flesh anchor

Rhian has asked for poetry today, as she asks, I comply…

9 comments to “Drowning In You (a wee poem)”

  1. Susan Helene Gottfried
    April 23rd, 2007 at 1:37 pm · Link

    Nice one! Happy Poetry Monday!

  2. Wylie Kinson
    April 23rd, 2007 at 1:39 pm · Link

    Great haiku
    I wish I could do it too
    My sin is wordiness

  3. rhian
    April 23rd, 2007 at 2:56 pm · Link

    ditto what wylie said – wordy-rhi, that’s me. that’s why i think haiku is so elegant and powerful and beyond my ability to write. hmmm – maybe we should make one of these poetry monday’s a haiku challenge?

  4. Christine d'Abo
    April 23rd, 2007 at 3:35 pm · Link

    This is great! I’m too wordy too for haiku. Novel, that I can do. :mrgreen:

  5. Lauren
    April 23rd, 2007 at 3:38 pm · Link

    I think sex is the perfect subject for haiku. There are a million, small observations about sex that say so much.

    I love novels about sex, I write em all the time. But with haiku, you can boil the subject down to a pinpoint focus. Just a breath, a gasp, a touch. I love it.

  6. Robin L. Rotham
    April 23rd, 2007 at 4:03 pm · Link

    What an elegant piece — thanks for sharing it! I wish I could write haiku, but unfortunately, succinctness is not my forte. 😀

  7. Erica R
    April 23rd, 2007 at 6:40 pm · Link

    Yay! I’m having fun being part of the poetry train. Love reading all the poems. =)

  8. Shelli Stevens
    April 23rd, 2007 at 7:22 pm · Link

    Nice! I haven’t been here lately. I like the new layout! 😀

  9. Sam
    April 24th, 2007 at 5:42 am · Link

    I love wee poems – and this one is lovely!!

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