Turn to page 123 in your work-in-progress. (If you haven’t gotten to page 123 yet, then turn to page 23. If you haven’t gotten there yet, then get busy and write page 23.) Count down four sentences and then instead of just the fifth sentence, give us the whole paragraph.
I’ll do that and give you a teeny bit more from Goddess With A Blade…
He jerked his head, gesturing at the room. “I get here, three floors below and Ben is there, telling me you’ve moved. What did you do to warrant this place, Rowan?”
His lips were so close to hers she felt his words as he spoke.
“It was a bonus from my employer. I just returned the day before yesterday. I called you last night but you weren’t in. Did you miss me?” She couldn’t help but ask.
He pressed into her harder, leaving no doubt. “What do you think? And you didn’t answer my question, where’ve you been?”
“On a case. I told you that before. Things got complicated. I needed to deal with some fall out and it’s done. I’m back.”