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July 16th, 2007
Poetry Monday

Just one line, a snippet really, still 18 and over please.

Looking down between us, the sight of your cock disappearing into me and retreating mesmerizes me…

8 comments to “Poetry Monday”

  1. Yeup, that’s one line, all right. And a whole LOT of heat and imagery.

    Nicely done!!!!


  2. talk about minimalist heaven!
    Susan is right - a whole lotta heat and imagery. Not surprisingly i keep going back to read it again and again.


  3. Oh yum I love that visual. And Lauren, I see you are doing fantastic in the writing challenge. I need to get my butt down to work, I feel the P-R-E-S-S-U-R-E!


  4. I’m a little mesmerised too


  5. You inspired me to wax poetic, too.


  6. Definitely, nicely done. Must go sweat now.


  7. A single line…

    wow


  8. What a snippet it was