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April 23rd, 2007
Drowning In You (a wee poem)
I’m drowning in you
slipping the binds that hold me
hands on flesh anchor

Rhian has asked for poetry today, as she asks, I comply…

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9 comments to “Drowning In You (a wee poem)”

  1. Nice one! Happy Poetry Monday!

    by Susan Helene Gottfried April 23rd, 2007 at 1:37 pm

  2. Great haiku
    I wish I could do it too
    My sin is wordiness

    by Wylie Kinson April 23rd, 2007 at 1:39 pm

  3. ditto what wylie said - wordy-rhi, that’s me. that’s why i think haiku is so elegant and powerful and beyond my ability to write. hmmm - maybe we should make one of these poetry monday’s a haiku challenge?

    by rhian April 23rd, 2007 at 2:56 pm

  4. This is great! I’m too wordy too for haiku. Novel, that I can do.

    by Christine d'Abo April 23rd, 2007 at 3:35 pm

  5. I think sex is the perfect subject for haiku. There are a million, small observations about sex that say so much.

    I love novels about sex, I write em all the time. But with haiku, you can boil the subject down to a pinpoint focus. Just a breath, a gasp, a touch. I love it.

    by Lauren April 23rd, 2007 at 3:38 pm

  6. What an elegant piece — thanks for sharing it! I wish I could write haiku, but unfortunately, succinctness is not my forte. :D

    by Robin L. Rotham April 23rd, 2007 at 4:03 pm

  7. Yay! I’m having fun being part of the poetry train. Love reading all the poems. =)

    by Erica R April 23rd, 2007 at 6:40 pm

  8. Nice! I haven’t been here lately. I like the new layout! :D

    by Shelli Stevens April 23rd, 2007 at 7:22 pm

  9. I love wee poems - and this one is lovely!!

    by Sam April 24th, 2007 at 5:42 am


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