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Drowning In You (a wee poem)
Apr
23
2007
I’m drowning in you
slipping the binds that hold me
hands on flesh anchor

Rhian has asked for poetry today, as she asks, I comply…

9 comments to “Drowning In You (a wee poem)”

  1. Susan Helene Gottfried
    April 23rd, 2007 at 1:37 pm · Link

    Nice one! Happy Poetry Monday!



  2. Wylie Kinson
    April 23rd, 2007 at 1:39 pm · Link

    Great haiku
    I wish I could do it too
    My sin is wordiness
    😎



  3. rhian
    April 23rd, 2007 at 2:56 pm · Link

    ditto what wylie said – wordy-rhi, that’s me. that’s why i think haiku is so elegant and powerful and beyond my ability to write. hmmm – maybe we should make one of these poetry monday’s a haiku challenge?



  4. Christine d'Abo
    April 23rd, 2007 at 3:35 pm · Link

    This is great! I’m too wordy too for haiku. Novel, that I can do. :mrgreen:



  5. Lauren
    April 23rd, 2007 at 3:38 pm · Link

    I think sex is the perfect subject for haiku. There are a million, small observations about sex that say so much.

    I love novels about sex, I write em all the time. But with haiku, you can boil the subject down to a pinpoint focus. Just a breath, a gasp, a touch. I love it.



  6. Robin L. Rotham
    April 23rd, 2007 at 4:03 pm · Link

    What an elegant piece — thanks for sharing it! I wish I could write haiku, but unfortunately, succinctness is not my forte. 😀



  7. Erica R
    April 23rd, 2007 at 6:40 pm · Link

    Yay! I’m having fun being part of the poetry train. Love reading all the poems. =)



  8. Shelli Stevens
    April 23rd, 2007 at 7:22 pm · Link

    Nice! I haven’t been here lately. I like the new layout! 😀



  9. Sam
    April 24th, 2007 at 5:42 am · Link

    I love wee poems – and this one is lovely!!





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