ditto what wylie said – wordy-rhi, that’s me. that’s why i think haiku is so elegant and powerful and beyond my ability to write. hmmm – maybe we should make one of these poetry monday’s a haiku challenge?
I think sex is the perfect subject for haiku. There are a million, small observations about sex that say so much.
I love novels about sex, I write em all the time. But with haiku, you can boil the subject down to a pinpoint focus. Just a breath, a gasp, a touch. I love it.
April 23rd, 2007 at 1:37 pm · Link
Nice one! Happy Poetry Monday!
April 23rd, 2007 at 1:39 pm · Link
Great haiku
I wish I could do it too
My sin is wordiness
😎
April 23rd, 2007 at 2:56 pm · Link
ditto what wylie said – wordy-rhi, that’s me. that’s why i think haiku is so elegant and powerful and beyond my ability to write. hmmm – maybe we should make one of these poetry monday’s a haiku challenge?
April 23rd, 2007 at 3:35 pm · Link
This is great! I’m too wordy too for haiku. Novel, that I can do.
April 23rd, 2007 at 3:38 pm · Link
I think sex is the perfect subject for haiku. There are a million, small observations about sex that say so much.
I love novels about sex, I write em all the time. But with haiku, you can boil the subject down to a pinpoint focus. Just a breath, a gasp, a touch. I love it.
April 23rd, 2007 at 4:03 pm · Link
What an elegant piece — thanks for sharing it! I wish I could write haiku, but unfortunately, succinctness is not my forte. 😀
April 23rd, 2007 at 6:40 pm · Link
Yay! I’m having fun being part of the poetry train. Love reading all the poems. =)
April 23rd, 2007 at 7:22 pm · Link
Nice! I haven’t been here lately. I like the new layout! 😀
April 24th, 2007 at 5:42 am · Link
I love wee poems – and this one is lovely!!