Comments on: Poetry Monday http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/ A seduction in words Fri, 05 Dec 2008 13:29:58 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 By: Susan Helene Gottfried http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16344 Susan Helene Gottfried Tue, 31 Jul 2007 23:56:05 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16344 Yep. That's poetry, all right. Nicely done, darling. VERY nicely done. Yep. That’s poetry, all right.

Nicely done, darling. VERY nicely done.

]]> By: gautami http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16339 gautami Tue, 31 Jul 2007 08:06:49 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16339 Beautiful Imagery in there. Beautiful Imagery in there.

]]> By: Lillian Feisty http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16338 Lillian Feisty Tue, 31 Jul 2007 05:24:41 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16338 I always love your poems. So sensual. I always love your poems. So sensual.

]]> By: Sparky Duck http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16337 Sparky Duck Tue, 31 Jul 2007 04:31:54 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16337 the magnolia sets the scene so well the magnolia sets the scene so well

]]> By: Lisa Andel http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16336 Lisa Andel Mon, 30 Jul 2007 23:44:20 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16336 Great imagery even though I'm not much of an F/F fan. Great imagery even though I’m not much of an F/F fan.

]]> By: Ann http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16335 Ann Mon, 30 Jul 2007 22:49:56 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16335 Awesome snippet. "Silvery light caresses flesh like a physical touch", and the sighs "rising in the air like music". Lovely. Awesome snippet. “Silvery light caresses flesh like a physical touch”, and the sighs “rising in the air like music”. Lovely.

]]> By: rhian http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16334 rhian Mon, 30 Jul 2007 21:40:20 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/07/30/poetry-monday-4/#comment-16334 INcredibly seductive Lauren! This line filled my nose with a memory of scent: "Magnolia hangs in my nose, seducing my senses." INcredibly seductive Lauren! This line filled my nose with a memory of scent:
“Magnolia hangs in my nose, seducing my senses.”

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