July 30th, 2007
A bit of an image. 18 and over only please - Mildly F/F
Southern Sylph
Midnight. The moon hangs full and low. Heavy, fecund. Silvery light caresses flesh like a physical touch. Magnolia hangs in my nose, seducing my senses. Stepping forward I take your breasts in my hands. Their weight tantalizes. Tongues slide together, mixing with soft sighs. Rising on the air like music.
Name:Lauren Dane
INcredibly seductive Lauren! This line filled my nose with a memory of scent:
by rhian July 30th, 2007 at 2:40 pm“Magnolia hangs in my nose, seducing my senses.”
Awesome snippet. “Silvery light caresses flesh like a physical touch”, and the sighs “rising in the air like music”. Lovely.
by Ann July 30th, 2007 at 3:49 pmGreat imagery even though I’m not much of an F/F fan.
by Lisa Andel July 30th, 2007 at 4:44 pmthe magnolia sets the scene so well
by Sparky Duck July 30th, 2007 at 9:31 pmI always love your poems. So sensual.
by Lillian Feisty July 30th, 2007 at 10:24 pmBeautiful Imagery in there.
by gautami July 31st, 2007 at 1:06 amYep. That’s poetry, all right.
Nicely done, darling. VERY nicely done.
by Susan Helene Gottfried July 31st, 2007 at 4:56 pm