Comments on: Poetry Monday http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/28/poetry-monday-2/ A seduction in words Thu, 28 Aug 2008 08:30:38 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 By: Susan Helene Gottfried http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/28/poetry-monday-2/#comment-15724 Susan Helene Gottfried Wed, 30 May 2007 00:08:57 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/28/poetry-monday-2/#comment-15724 More! More! More! More!

]]> By: Joy Renee http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/28/poetry-monday-2/#comment-15722 Joy Renee Tue, 29 May 2007 03:34:32 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/28/poetry-monday-2/#comment-15722 this almost reads like a poem. all it needs is judiciously inserted line-breaks to ook like one too. excuse me while i go after more ice for my water bottle. this was my first ride on the Poetry Train: http://joystory.blogspot.com/2007/05/monday-poetry-train-1.html this almost reads like a poem. all it needs is judiciously inserted line-breaks to ook like one too.

excuse me while i go after more ice for my water bottle.

this was my first ride on the Poetry Train: http://joystory.blogspot.com/2007/05/monday-poetry-train-1.html

]]> By: rhian http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/28/poetry-monday-2/#comment-15721 rhian Mon, 28 May 2007 22:55:54 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/28/poetry-monday-2/#comment-15721 Sigh. This is so awesomely great and hot. Now i have to go back to the sex scene i was just working on and stab it with my keyboard. repeatedly. then bury it where no one can find the bodies. I especially like this line and how much of their connection it conveys in just a few words: "He’s inside me. Not physically, not yet." Sigh. This is so awesomely great and hot. Now i have to go back to the sex scene i was just working on and stab it with my keyboard. repeatedly. then bury it where no one can find the bodies.

I especially like this line and how much of their connection it conveys in just a few words: “He’s inside me. Not physically, not yet.”

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