Comments on: Poetry Monday (or rather, freeform creative writing monday) http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/ A seduction in words Fri, 05 Dec 2008 13:47:24 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 By: anya bast http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15608 anya bast Tue, 22 May 2007 13:29:48 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15608 Oh, yummy. I love this one. Oh, yummy. I love this one.

]]> By: Susan Helene Gottfried http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15605 Susan Helene Gottfried Tue, 22 May 2007 01:13:07 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15605 I think we all cued in to that flesh hearing your breath line. Wow, is that a strong one. As always, wonderful! I posted fiction today. Not terribly exciting, but survey says it's a funny one. I think we all cued in to that flesh hearing your breath line. Wow, is that a strong one.

As always, wonderful!

I posted fiction today. Not terribly exciting, but survey says it’s a funny one.

]]> By: stak http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15603 stak Mon, 21 May 2007 21:48:04 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15603 okay, i'm officially ridiculously turned on now......thanks for making me walk with a limp............ okay, i’m officially ridiculously turned on now……thanks for making me walk with a limp…………

]]> By: Christine http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15601 Christine Mon, 21 May 2007 20:48:03 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15601 "I am blindfolded but my flesh can hear your breath" Great poem. I'm going to follow suit and read to my husband in bed this evening! Thanks! Mine's up too. “I am blindfolded
but my flesh can hear
your breath”

Great poem. I’m going to follow suit and read to my husband in bed this evening! Thanks!

Mine’s up too.

]]> By: R.G. Alexander http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15600 R.G. Alexander Mon, 21 May 2007 19:57:22 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15600 Always sizzling! I agree-I need to wait till Cookie gets home to read these babies! Awesome. Always sizzling! I agree-I need to wait till Cookie gets home to read these babies! Awesome.

]]> By: rhian http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15593 rhian Mon, 21 May 2007 17:33:47 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/05/21/poetry-monday-or-rather-freeform-creative-writing-monday/#comment-15593 there's something about that word throb, ya know. LOVE: "but my flesh can hear your breath" and "with the tails of the flogger it sings" i need to start reading yours after work when hubby is around. ...POUNCE.... there’s something about that word throb, ya know.
LOVE: “but my flesh can hear
your breath” and “with the tails of the flogger it sings”

i need to start reading yours after work when hubby is around. …POUNCE….

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