Comments on: Drowning In You (a wee poem) http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/ A seduction in words Sat, 05 Jul 2008 18:10:45 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3.3 By: Sam http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15264 Sam Tue, 24 Apr 2007 12:42:23 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15264 I love wee poems - and this one is lovely!! I love wee poems - and this one is lovely!!

]]> By: Shelli Stevens http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15262 Shelli Stevens Tue, 24 Apr 2007 02:22:18 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15262 Nice! I haven't been here lately. I like the new layout! :D Nice! I haven’t been here lately. I like the new layout! :D

]]> By: Erica R http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15261 Erica R Tue, 24 Apr 2007 01:40:33 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15261 Yay! I'm having fun being part of the poetry train. Love reading all the poems. =) Yay! I’m having fun being part of the poetry train. Love reading all the poems. =)

]]> By: Robin L. Rotham http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15260 Robin L. Rotham Mon, 23 Apr 2007 23:03:24 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15260 What an elegant piece -- thanks for sharing it! I wish I could write haiku, but unfortunately, succinctness is not my forte. :D What an elegant piece — thanks for sharing it! I wish I could write haiku, but unfortunately, succinctness is not my forte. :D

]]> By: Lauren http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15259 Lauren Mon, 23 Apr 2007 22:38:17 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15259 I think sex is the perfect subject for haiku. There are a million, small observations about sex that say so much. I love novels about sex, I write em all the time. But with haiku, you can boil the subject down to a pinpoint focus. Just a breath, a gasp, a touch. I love it. I think sex is the perfect subject for haiku. There are a million, small observations about sex that say so much.

I love novels about sex, I write em all the time. But with haiku, you can boil the subject down to a pinpoint focus. Just a breath, a gasp, a touch. I love it.

]]> By: Christine d'Abo http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15258 Christine d'Abo Mon, 23 Apr 2007 22:35:59 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15258 This is great! I'm too wordy too for haiku. Novel, that I can do. :mrgreen: This is great! I’m too wordy too for haiku. Novel, that I can do.

]]> By: rhian http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15257 rhian Mon, 23 Apr 2007 21:56:25 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15257 ditto what wylie said - wordy-rhi, that's me. that's why i think haiku is so elegant and powerful and beyond my ability to write. hmmm - maybe we should make one of these poetry monday's a haiku challenge? ditto what wylie said - wordy-rhi, that’s me. that’s why i think haiku is so elegant and powerful and beyond my ability to write. hmmm - maybe we should make one of these poetry monday’s a haiku challenge?

]]> By: Wylie Kinson http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15256 Wylie Kinson Mon, 23 Apr 2007 20:39:21 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15256 Great haiku I wish I could do it too My sin is wordiness :cool: Great haiku
I wish I could do it too
My sin is wordiness

]]> By: Susan Helene Gottfried http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15255 Susan Helene Gottfried Mon, 23 Apr 2007 20:37:09 +0000 http://www.laurendane.com/blog/2007/04/23/drowning-in-you-a-wee-poem/#comment-15255 Nice one! Happy Poetry Monday! Nice one! Happy Poetry Monday!

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